2 worlds apart

this is the phase I am in right now...

2 worlds apart…

 

 

I have been trying to understand but… not anymore,

Deception, illusion had stroke for a while…

It used to hurt me …now the pain is no more,

But a pinch of distraught that will vanish in a smile.

 

Your world and mine are far away apart,

Yours focused on glitter, looks and artificiality…

Mine is deeper, less visual, more focused on the heart,

Dealing with quiet reflection, analyze of “authenticity”.

 

I have to admit that there is no connection,

What I see you don’t and what you see I won’t…

Years of secrecy and lies, ending up in no direction,

Just the tears in my eyes, imprinting its font.

 

It’s ok though… I have love around me,

I feel its energy swirling around endlessly…

I hear its whispers brought to me by the sea,

I accept its gifts given to me generously.

 

Author's Note

to review with sensitivity please...

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh! This is such a beautiful piece of writing, your feelings are flowing here so effortlessly!
It's not very often to find that perfect soulmate in our life but even though if we find them ....then trust me it is not always necessary that two honest people will also result in an honest relationship.

There in nothing worst in this world than to move on with a broken relationship, I can understand your feeling behind this because this is exactly what I feel....so together, yet so broken up inside!

I loved this line the most -
"It used to hurt me �now the pain is no more," - This is exactly what I'm going through right now, not because I have defeated the pain but just because I have started to live with it...

Once in our life a time comes when someone will break our heart into piece and then it depends upon us, either to be with that broken heart till the end or to move on by mending it again...And I'm just so glad that you've moved on!

Great great great piece of writing it is!

[Samuel Dickens]

I read Yos's comment and he says it so well. We are all different, and it hurts to find such a chasm where we previously knew of none. It's not your fault. Perhaps it is no one's fault. There are others who will love you the way you are.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Its so sad and familiar, very intimate brave poem, you are mentally naked and you look stright into the one you loved eyes and say the true, the true you knew for long time and didnt admit to him , to yourself, very honest fresh air coming from this poem, a new wave, and hope, to release from the cables of un real love ... Thanks for sharing , Yossi

[emmajoy]

Disillusionment hurts so deeply. The need to accept the differences between you and someone else is one of the most painful emotions there is. ' Mine is deeper, less visual, more focused on the heart, / Dealing with quiet reflection, analyze of "authenticity".'

BUT, you use the final stanza to praise what you have, that love and what it brings you.

This is such a sad poem, Nassira.. beautifully written, beautifully expressing what you feel, (You)