Saved By Sins

Waiting for an absolution

         A remission of my sin

Release me from punishment

        For there is something more within

By no way do I claim

        Nor will I ever, to be a saint

Far from flawless

        Perfect I ain't

All of my mistakes

        My entire aberration

Part of the process

        A live and learn collaboration

Knowledge isn't just  power

        Its strength, to say the least

Ignorance isn't bliss

        Its the belly of the beast

The beast being damnation

       That feeds on the naive

My sins have saved me

       I believe

Reviews

[Astro]

I like it a lot KJ very good rhyme and structure. If I have one suggestion the last line is a bit short. Perhaps, "This I do believe." or...not. As it stands it is very well written and clear as to meaning and gives the reader something to think about, like where we stand. In the belly or out of harm.

[Ency Bearis]

Great piece pleasure to read

[End.]

Knowledge isn't just power
Its strength, to say the least

very true. your words ring true. i love the title. i feel this piece is all about how our mistakes refine us.

[Simon Welsh]

I like the flow. Well written.

[Mother Maggie]

Christ consciousness teaches us that there is nothing to forgive--we are perfect spiritual beings living a human existance for the purpose of learning and experiencing the many aspects of humanity.


Namaste and Blessed Be

[Cool Handless Luke]

Ignorance isn't bliss
Its the belly of the beast...
nice lines. great message...perfect ending

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Be your own savior. Insightful and an excellent read & write.

[SyberRose]

That feeds on the naive
My sins have saved me
I believe

I like those lines...one learns from their mistakes...:)

[Renée]

Sins, lessons, learning and changing is the important thing..nice job

[Elle Thompson]

this feels really forced. I like the last couple lines, though.