Heartbreak Art

Heartbreak Art

A Poem by KeelyJane

Such a pretty picture I've painted in my mind
A Monet of fantasy
A Van Gogh seek but no find
            Just an illusion really
            the imagination of my heart
            Mixed media emotions
            I call it Heartbreak Art
                         Dabs of disappointment 
                         across my internal canvas
                         There is us
                         and then there is this
      

© 2019 KeelyJane


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"There is us
and then there is this"

so beautiful how you use the art images all the way through and then finish it out with this poignant line! you've painted this picture in your mind but it is not what your relationship with this person really is. you've deceived yourself within he beauty of the sadness. my favorite image was the mixed media emotions. great work!

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There and this occupying identical footings, either happiness or the USS Disaster! Even the mighty HMS Titantic went down early and hard! Another nice word picture here!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice elaboration of poetry as art

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"There is us
and then there is this"

so beautiful how you use the art images all the way through and then finish it out with this poignant line! you've painted this picture in your mind but it is not what your relationship with this person really is. you've deceived yourself within he beauty of the sadness. my favorite image was the mixed media emotions. great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unique and artistic creativity well versed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot, from the descriptions of famous painters styles invading your hearts imagination and the knowledge that it is but an illusion, but that it gives life to your "Heartbreak Art". Great voice and creativity KJ.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very descriptive and telling, a joy to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gosh, absolutely beautiful! (As a creative person) I really loved how you tied art in with love. Beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the world warps to our perceptions. Sometimes we wish for it.

Simple, elegant work. I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good title that suits the theme of your poem. You paint a vivid picture of your thoughts, the color of it viewed through your imagination. Unique, creative and powerful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Artistic. I like. Love the structure.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 22, 2013
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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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