Pull

Pull

A Poem by KeelyJane

Pushing
toward uncertain
Manipulating directions
Up, down and all ways
Hallways and sections
random
emotion
unstable
affections
No answers
many questions
Pushing
Mental erection
Go with gut protection
Sixth senseless and stupid
My suggestion
Pull

© 2013 KeelyJane



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There is a finesse to knowing when to push and when to pull. Growing up in a logging town, I used to compete in sawbuck competitions. It was a graceful and dangerous dance between my partner and I and the two man saw--tbe trick was to pull, then hold the tension as your partner pulled as the saw danced thru the log--teeth inches from upper thigh muscles...

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Another delightful read in my book. I certainly plan on reading more. Now I'm gonna push off....N

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I, at my age, like the idea of pulling for the mental erection, whether actual or or just in theory. Sometimes, it may require the use flashcards for effect! Nice mental image I have to blame you for, KJ!

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Sixth senseless and stupid" I like that idea, sometimes your gut is just wrong and you need to know more, before making a move. Or...go the other way. Cool write KJ.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Outside the box writing KeelyJane - pull when you are expected to push - a bit like poetic martial arts!
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Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I see this as a mental wrestling match of decision and indecision; moreover, I see this as life being lived by emotion and common sense. Both are sometimes painful but purposeful and we need to know when to pull and when we need to push. What do you mean when you wrote "mental erection" and "gut protection"?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeelyJane

4 Years Ago

mental erection is kind of like keen awareness and gut protection refers to instinct.
Outstanding and Clever write Jane :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a finesse to knowing when to push and when to pull. Growing up in a logging town, I used to compete in sawbuck competitions. It was a graceful and dangerous dance between my partner and I and the two man saw--tbe trick was to pull, then hold the tension as your partner pulled as the saw danced thru the log--teeth inches from upper thigh muscles...

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I see the reflective in this one...always pushing when the intent is just to pull...in a small amount of words and yet gives much to the reader...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The tug of war ; push and pull. You chose pull...Bravo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pushing and pulling
reminds me of my wifey
so does manipulating
some days I still miss her

ARRGH!!!
just go with your strong points, love

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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