Universeless

Universeless

A Poem by KeelyJane

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Artistically presented, and the wording gives a real sense of falling into a void...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved how you wrote this piece to start with. I love the emotion packed with this piece... Another thing I loved how you wrote it on the picture. The picture goes great with the meaning of the poem... Great job all the way around...

Posted 10 Years Ago


All lovely and interesting even the structure...:)
Thank you for sharing...:)......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting structure. I like.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dark and ominous is the feel of this piece. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow the void is really felt in this piece, formatting adds to that feeling of darkly clouds in that space of emptiness, well done Keely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 21, 2013
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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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