Breath of Death

Breath of Death

A Poem by KeelyJane

I exhaled a piece of me when I let you go,
my heart be my breath

I gasped for your love,
I breathed it to death

I inhale the cold and emptiness,
fill my lungs in chest

The air of goodbye,
suffocate this love for the best

© 2020 KeelyJane


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I respond in due time. Brb...

Posted 10 Years Ago


"my heart be my breath"..."I breathed it to death" offer up an interesting take on your feelings of loss. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 15, 2013
Last Updated on September 28, 2020

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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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