Bloody Knows

Bloody Knows

A Poem by KeelyJane

Her insides bleed a thousand voices
screaming red, unheard
She's hemorrhaging her feelings
dying with internal word
Slice through her flesh walls
listen to what flows

The bloody knows


© 2013 KeelyJane



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Explosive poem!
I can easily relate to the pain you describe as your words help me feel it
It is only a sign of a well educated poet using little words to describe so many deep emotions
I hope you never stop writing and I hope you receive good the great credit you deserve
Cant wait to read more

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Relatively speaking, a nice play with words & let's not of course forget meaning. Ragged and real, just the way I like em........................N

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great play on words and great word play. I'll betcha KeelyJane wrote this one! The poet knows!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Explosive poem!
I can easily relate to the pain you describe as your words help me feel it
It is only a sign of a well educated poet using little words to describe so many deep emotions
I hope you never stop writing and I hope you receive good the great credit you deserve
Cant wait to read more

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was painful to read, and I mean that in the best way possible.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An explosion of pain .... Very nice!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And this in a nutshell is why we write. So we don't keep the pain inside. So those wounds may bleed till they heal. So our feelings do not overcome us with internal injury. Very nicely done, and with such feeling!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

People do things with a smile for the public, but what happens when they are alone with themselves afterwards? That's what you poem made me think. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is bloodcurdling, so good. The room left for thought to put a finger on what the poetess had in mind whiles writing this wow.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very profound and heartfelt poem .Well penned :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, what a punch in the nose this is. Raw and in your face. Phenomenal play on words


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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