Bloody Knows

Her insides bleed a thousand voices
screaming red, unheard
She's hemorrhaging her feelings
dying with internal word
Behind her flesh walls
where the unspoken flows
Only the bloody knows

Reviews

[Yasmin]

Explosive poem!
I can easily relate to the pain you describe as your words help me feel it
It is only a sign of a well educated poet using little words to describe so many deep emotions
I hope you never stop writing and I hope you receive good the great credit you deserve
Cant wait to read more

[Inda]

This is almost disgusting. LOL But really it could be the rawness of this piece that gives me that feeling, made me kind cringe a little, which means this was very effective!

[AleyshaRosa]

Jesus, the pain...
And I know... This viciousness of this poem slammed into my heart, as short as it was. It takes true skill to portray such emotion in so few words. Thank you for sharing the bloody truth of pain.

Koodoos

[Tarry Franck]

I like everything about this piece - it flows so well. Great job

[Simon Welsh]

Love your writing. Through pain we express.

[MoriartyMesa]

One could feel the warm and steaming flow come down the neck. Nice job

[TL Boehm]

hemorrhaging her feelings. Such a powerful phrase this is.

[Frieda P]

The dying of words unheard, listening intently seems to go over most heads, these screams are loud and clear, good one Keely.

[Sami Khalil]

Bleeding bloody good...Bravo..........

[Caradoc]

"The Blood is the life..."

An eerie, creepy, yet strangely introspective piece. I wonder what type of blade was used to unearth what was inside...Or was it not a blade, but love?

Thought provoking and descriptive.

I liked it.

-Caradoc

[I Am Svetlana]

Interesting piece here, but I really like it :) The title kind of prepares us, haha. It's scary to know that a human is only just skin, bone and blood. Slice us open and we continue to bleed. We are never safe for too long.