Thought Process

A Poem by KeelyJane

Emotional tantrums
This tempest heart
Abysmal in feeling
Inspirations counterpart
My thoughts abound
Temporarily abstract
Awaiting expression
Matter meet fact

© 2014 KeelyJane

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Perdition

This one reads like a new breed of Haiku on fire. An image with every line. Certainly passionate to the closing line as I believe the pathology of our perceptions should be intended. A "PERFECT" title as well as overall beat/pace/message. Deserves a worthy spring porch; cricketed and wicker rocking-chaired as well. A piping hot coffee and far off stare right into the "temporarily abstract", Loved it...Thanks!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Vidya Bacchus

Ashort poem with so much meaning.Well penned Keely Jane

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on February 15, 2014
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KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM

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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..