Red Light Sugar

A few years resolution-- A story that’s been warped

Do you know now?

You said the end could come. Yet I’m still sitting in my room

The room full, full with the glittering moon.

All the mistakes dimly glow back

We took the town, It’s our show after all

Strings gone; They dance to the tempos of the flies--

Dead people smelled so well. That was when the s**t hit the fan

The splatter you left behind looks like a clown

Amused yet? As sure as hell been

Don’t forget your jacket when you leave again--

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This was stunning. I mean that; I don't like to use that word when I am not stunned. This was absolutely impressive. Great job my friend.

[Calypso]

:) :)

[tHe]

Brilliant work, you are just so talented. This is just another outstanding piece of writing. Keep up the great work.

[M Garcia]

Nicely written! Keep it up.

[Calypso]

Thank you very much.

[M Garcia]

You're most welcome.

[MandaBear]

Very interesting poem! Great write =)

[Calypso]

Thank you very much.