Great poem! It wasn't hard to follow at all. The flow of the poem was very good and I really liked it! There are so many good things about this poem that I could say. While reading it, I felt so many emotions coming from this writing such as anger, sadness, and yearning. I also felt an eerie feeling while reading this. Overall, it was a great poem and I enjoyed reading it! :D
How bitter and jealous love can make us, eh? Very nice poem, didn't find it difficult to follow. I enjoyed reading it.
Not being critical, just trying to be helpful, the second line of the first stanza, should "fell" be "feel"? And the second line of the second stanza should your be you're? Typos are common though and don't detract from this piece, it was still very nice and slightly morbid.
Great poem! It wasn't hard to follow at all. The flow of the poem was very good and I really liked it! There are so many good things about this poem that I could say. While reading it, I felt so many emotions coming from this writing such as anger, sadness, and yearning. I also felt an eerie feeling while reading this. Overall, it was a great poem and I enjoyed reading it! :D
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