We're Stars

Inspired by the song "Stars" by Hear N' Aid

kinda a tribute to rock inspired by a tribute to metal called "stars" by hear n' aid. its a awesome song. and i'd like to think this poem is cool too :)

Reviews

[No Longer in use]

Smashing! Each stanza was unqiue but flowed with such beauty. I did find quite a few spelling errors, though:
First stanza: no real problems, but my advice is to omit that comma, since you don't use commas anywhere else in the piece
Third stanza: *fills
Sixth stanza: *you're
Eigth stanza: well, there's no error per se, but I would delete the "to."
Twelfth stanza: *it's also, *we're

Other than that, I loved this. It was very inspirational and made me smile. My favorite:
"Rock hard ride free
Float like a Cadillac sting like a bee"
I quite enjoyed this! Nice work, and thanks for sharing!

Happy writing,
Savannah

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks, should check out the video of the song on my status :)

[afra]

wowww..amazing ...it went straight into my heart ...this one is my favorite...good job

[Emily Noella Vee]

Sweet Child O' Mine, Don't Fear The Reaper, When Doves Cry, Learning To Fly- All my favourite songs! Nice work, Harley. Keep the awesome work coming.