cities on flame with my soul

Parody of blue oyster cult's "cities on flame with rock and roll"

this is all i have right now, its not done but do you like it so far? also the original song is a must hear!!

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

yes, I do like the song. Rock and Roll nation!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank you for reviewing this! It reminded me I need to put up the finished one! :D thanks!

[Laura Maidah]

So it sounds like this speaker knows pain. maybe the mood is nice and strong, but the meaning is weak because I have no idea what happened to the poor guy. Guy/girl. All i know is life sucks and the narrator oughtta die or kill himself/herself

[SHEEMA HUQ]

extreme - concise

[Bleeding-Schizo]

This one had a lot of anger .___. But great all the same!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank yooou! ^_^

[Skia1717]

That's really good. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Mazie Tackett]

nice i really i like this one

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Mazie Tackett]

k

[Grayeyes]

Flows nicely as a song. It's an inspiration! (:

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice beginning for the song. I look forward to see where you are taking this song. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you for the review!

[Dr. Wood ?]

make a good song lyric...go out and buy a guitar

[Harley (arbiter)]

Would if I could :D

[Mariah Corey]

I like how u gave the reader a clear image of what you were trying describe and i luv it how u write.