moved on
A Poem by
Harley (arbiter)
just threw together from a few lines from a song. thanks erika for the topic ^_^ and its not my best but its ok
© 2012 Harley (arbiter)
Author's Note
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I gave you all of me
Put you first in line
What a waste of time
I was always yours
You were never mine
How could you leave me standing outside?
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Because your cold
Nothing near bold
Hiding behind your time
Begging to steal mine
I have better things to do
Then deal with a b¡tch like you
I drive off in my Trans Am
Or my Dodge Ram
Knowing I don't give a d@m
And I hope you know
Reap what you sow
Your not the dead weight I'm gonna tow
You think its my loss
Well your the boss
You said move on
Well now I'm gone
And I'm happy and gittery
Because I'm free as can be
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wow, this is very amazing! good job!
Posted 8 Months Ago
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..yeah
that's the smell of freedom
=]
Posted 8 Months Ago
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great job amazing poem i can relate mann
Posted 8 Months Ago
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JITTERY
I hate when people spell it with a "g".
YOu think it's my loss?
Well you're the boss.
Posted 9 Months Ago
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I drive off in my trans am or dodge ram knowing I don't give a damn. HA!
Great job
Posted 9 Months Ago
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I like how you find good in a negative situation. Its clear you weren't too happy but you were strong enough to keep your head up.
Posted 9 Months Ago
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keep writing to feed your integrety
Posted 9 Months Ago
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Your strong and it shows... It hurts you, but not bad enough to bring you down... nice job
Posted 9 Months Ago
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wow, i love it! very well said! your great with words, which is an awesome and very sought after writers trai! ^_^ nicely done my friend.
-mariah
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Months Ago
your welcome
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ok who's this about and text me dude you meantioned food earlier and i got hungry left the phone then when i finished eating you never texted me back grrrrrr this is all pizzas fault it was sooo tempting and i was sooo hungry fat girl gotta eat.......PIZZZA lol oh and pretty good poem
Posted 9 Months Ago
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9 Months Ago
Your not fat darn it!! And I didn't get ya txt sorry I will txt ya right now ^_^
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9 Months Ago
i am too and AWESOME!!!!
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9 Months Ago
No your not!
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9 Months Ago
-_- I refuse to believe that
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9 Months Ago
well i am whether you believe it or not
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9 Months Ago
Well your not whether you believe it or not
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