gift from me to you!

Made up in about a minute.

i just made this up. it has some meaning but i think i kinda veered off topic in the last line. i ran out of ideas

Reviews

[deepblue04]

the thought process it amazing! I like it

[Jordan A. Wilson]

I like the thought behind this

[Laura Maidah]

Wait who says it's awesome?



Everyone? Chhh.... Or is the author's note a poem

[RachelReaper]

You speak.... the TRUTH!!!!! :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

nice advice!

[Baby Ricochet]

So writers are like Santa. WOW!

[Harley (arbiter)]

yes lol

[The Analog Kid]

Good flow and rhyme!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks man!

[The Analog Kid]

YW

[Matty Bosox]

When I read that you are only 14 and you can write something so meaningful I am absolutlely astounded....I never once said your writing was awesome but this is quiet simply put the emotion of every writer I think....Every writer including myself thinks they are terrible at what they do and need that spark and energy of people reading their stuff and reviewing it like they actually read it...Not just saying "Oh this is good" or "Oh this sucked" Because those my friend are a writers worst enemy...You know the reviewer spent no time or effort on reading anything...They just wrote a review...You say its how people take the emotion out of your writing which could be a problem....But most of this poem is powerful, to the point, and most of all so very, very true...Good job!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks for your thoughts and thanks for reading.

[-musicfunk-]

the truthfulness is there
very universal in a sense
=]

[T. Logan]

I like it. Mostly because it's simple and to the point. the rhyme's pretty cool too.