Grenade!

Parody of eric clapton's "cocaine"

ok i couldnt sleep and was listening to "cocaine" by eric clapton to drift off into sleep then i thought of what a friend said that we should do a parody collaboration theeeeeen i thought of halo theeeeeeeeeeeen i thought of grenades then i made this! lol its kinda weird how i just went through probably the worst day of my life and wrote a kinda funny parody. it dont exactly fit with the orig. song but it was just for fun lol

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Haha, this reminded me of FPS video games, especially that part "If your ammo's gone...". Good job, it's really funny.

Oh, I have to ask, what's up with posting work in the Author's Note section? I noticed it a while ago on your work, and now I see Kenzie is doing the same for some of her stuff.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Weeeeel its because the moble site suuuuuuuucks and there's a problem with the actually box, sooooooo to make our poems look all nice and pretty we put it in a box where we can hit enter! Lol and yep it was kinda inspired a little by HALO

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Yeah, I figured it was something like that. That's why I hate going here on my mobile phone.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its secretly because were weirdos from another planet but don't tell anyone ok? Lol

[Tomislav Petricevic]

lol, ok, I just hope you don't enslave the human race. XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

O.O *puts down plasma gun* no. Not at all....

[♪Barklight♪]

What? well, there goes the univers.... kidding! kidding! *runs and hides from plasma gun*

[Harley (arbiter)]

*Throws plasma grenade where your hiding*

[♪Barklight♪]

RUUUUUNNNN!!!! lolz, is this an rp site now?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. Yes it is

[♪Barklight♪]

Hey! I could make one of those....... idea!

[Harley (arbiter)]

one of what!?!?! A plasma grenade or rp site? Lol

[♪Barklight♪]

lol an rp site! calm down! (if i tried to make a plasma grenade i'd have to explain why there's a crator in my room....)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh well cool. If you do send me a link. And uh if you try the other thing uh. Send me a free sample. 20 will do lol xD

[♪Barklight♪]

lol! will try soon, maby some sort of gadget too. no plasma garentees but still.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hey whatever works lol

[deepblue04]

this is a rather interesting song... Good job!!!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

haha i can dig it. cocaine is a hell of song.

[Gothic Girl]

haha. a lot of action going on here. love it!

[Laura Maidah]

Listening to cocaine?? Oooh I'm intrigued. Literally mouth drying ...


Poem makes me wet.

[Baby Ricochet]

I kind of remember that song. Before my time.Funny poem though. You shoud see the carnage a mark 19 granade launcher can lay down.

[RachelReaper]

I was cracking up through this whole thing, nicely done parody. Kept me smiling :)

[Michael G.]

Got my attention. (As I cautiously come back into the room.)

[Harley (arbiter)]

:D smart move lol thanks

[Princess Helviti]

I enjoyed this one... lol... Good job...

[J. F. Charleston]

That's somthing to do. Just run and throw a grenade.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

such a dangerous, volitile, unpredictable weapon and subject to tackle, which intreigued me about this poem and the ugly consequences are not addressed, deliberatley I suppose. I like this climatic ...dramatic content....well structured though not comfortable.