highway of my life

Parody of zbb "highway 20 ride"

i dont think its all that good. it doesnt flow with the song at some points and it just came to me while i couldnt sleep.  its for some people in my life that i cant live without. one especially in mind but all of them aswell if that makes any sense. thanks for reading and tell me what you think its about or what kinda feeling you got from reading it :]

Reviews

[Colleen a Bean]

I like this its really sweet and it sounds like u were hurt by someone u cared deeply for so I am sorry

[marie]

i love the way you place the poem the speaker seems regretful and hurt but at a strange peace knowing that they don't have a weight upon them anymore

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you ^_^

[marie]

No problem I enjoy your work:)

[Lane Craver]

very good! I get the feeling of the speaker being crushed in a relationship by his one true love

[Mariah Corey]

Every part was amazing i felt joy and freedom iin it. i don't have aot of words to describe this all i can say was " What made u write this awesome peice?"

[Harley (arbiter)]

A few things actually lol

[Mariah Corey]

lol. well whatever they are, its amazing. :D

[Gothic Girl]

this is really a good song. great job!

[Tamara Whatshername]

This would make a beautiful song.

[Laura Maidah]

This is not a song or performance piece. It's a brilliant visual and great poem/ Last stanza makes it dazzling.

[Cole Hayley]

If you can sing or know somebody that can put this to a good beat I think this could be an excelent song! It has the lyrics of an instant classic

[Soulfulbubbles]

good poem :) highway is a fun metaphor for life..

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks ^_^

[♪Barklight♪]

Good write, this one reminds me of someone too. Your good at writing songs, ya know that? Keep it up!

[Harley (arbiter)]

LIAR! I'm not good lol thanks ^_^

[♪Barklight♪]

yes you are!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I refuse to accept the truith!