She Makes Me Cry

I guess I should be stronger

It's only been a week
feels like a lifetime
I miss the day
when I could call her mine
now all we talk is "hey"

"I may be your girl
but you ain't my guy"
I'd give her the world
She makes me cry

I fought so hard
for her heart
but it doesn't even matter
because I can live without her

but I don't see why
we can't be friends any-longer
She makes me cry
I guess I should get stronger
or die

Author's Note

this was actually 3 unfinished poems put together. the very last line "or die" i just added while typing it to post :D i thought it could be a good closer maybe. you like it? should i leave it?

Reviews

[TheAdamBryant]

the poetry is really good , good job

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow. This is pretty...intense? I don't know what to call it, but it's all kinds of wonderful. Great work.

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks i wasnt expecting someone to call it intense.... then again we never know with you :D