Simple Minded

one track
simple mind

we don't lack
it's just our kind

we don't think slow
we just think it out

sometimes we don't know
and that makes y'all pout

get mad
say it's through

get sad
because we hurt you

with our one track
simple mind

Reviews

[SimpleMind]

I'm glad I read this one!

Really, I so love this poem. You conveyed not just your thoughts but also your reader's feelings. Simple mind, so much like me,..oh~ it's actually me :)

[Grayeyes]

I have always wanted to try this kind of poem; obviously never have. Good job. (:

[Baby Ricochet]

My wife used to say I was a "one drawer guy." What she meant was I could only focus my mind on one thing at a time which is true. That's true in general of the masculine mind set. Are thought process is like an arrow heading for a bullseye. The feminine mind set is more circular than that which can make it much more complex and in all honesty baffling to us. That's what I get from the line "sometimes we don't know and that makes ya'll pout." This is a really good poem. I wish I had written it. Thanx.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah that's pretty much it. Thanks for the review

[Melody]

So true...Good job. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks ^_^

[Melody]

No problem.