Free?

Free?

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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No

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this... this one is a weird one from me but i believe its true. 

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Free
A bird flying high
Through the great blue sky
A hemi driving fast
With enough road and gas to last
A lone wolf with no 1 home
Just wherever he can roam
No

Nothing is free
We
All
Everything
Bonded to this dimension
Atoms molecules
Hold us down
Keep us around
The bird can fly
But eventually its wings will die
The hemi can roar
But same with the bird before
The wolf can run
But after a time it has no more fun
Because
Nothing is free
We
All
Everything
Bound to this dimension
But...
Until death?

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a bit weir yet awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank yoou!
Awesome write dude. I love the words you string together :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thanks you
this is captivativating...i love the topic and the depth and how your words are independent phrases strung together, not sentences. this is really cool.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank you
oh my! dimensiality. I go crazy. All my atoms will decompose, and Carbon isotope! Aggghhh. lol j/k great write! ---mishe

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1809 Black Plague December

11 Years Ago

lol you need chemistry. yep. lol totaly laughing, cruel world. lol
Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Ah nice. I'm taking biology this year would that help? Lol and yes
1809 Black Plague December

11 Years Ago

you replied to your question, may be psychobiology. lol eeeeee lol cruel world.
Captivating... lyrical write. I like it. Speaking truth. Good job, friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Good read and write. We're free, it's a matter of perspective. Think of self as a spirit on a human adventure. We're not completely bound to the flesh.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Nice
Hmm... an interesting one from you. But it works and I like it a lot. :) Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
You're right. Nothing's free in this world . . . especially not freedom

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
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D: Well....that was a little heart breaking poor birdie!!! >_< Oh well not everything is happy mustard and crap! GREAT POEM! even though its sad, still good. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

thanks I guess :D

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