Give up..

Do you ever read a story?

where one doesn't want to live

her whole world is a shamble

and nothing left in her life is pure

only the tiny hearts that grew within her

keep her head above the dirt

She stares into a black hole

wishing it was where she was now

everything reminds her of things she hates

till loving eyes of her future 

puts her into a debate

softening what life has to give

and does not want

her Happiness does not come easy

when a man she loves

can't love her back

brands her a disappointment 

for everything she tried to do

she is tempted to reach for a knife

to bleed out the pain

but stares at the blade

remembering 

she can't do it again

looking at the past 

laid bare on her skin

no one understands her

no one knows where it all began

small loving eyes still care

but is it enough

she is standing on that edge

looking back 

her mind wants nothing more

give up.. give up..

her heart is telling her

Stop!...

Reviews

[Jibey]

Many people have such feelings - but those little ones keep their will to live alive... Unrequited love is a depressing thing... You capture it well here..

[Lily Mae]

The stop is that seed of self love that the darkness cannot destroy :) You've penned these emotions well..xx

[Misty Blue Eyes]

im going through this right now as we speak. i just wnat to give up and crawl into a black hole where its easy for everyone to forget about me