In my arms

In my arms

A Poem by RJM
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Inspired by the song "So Close" by Jon Mclaughlin

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In My Arms

The world slows down
as you enter my arms

Together we go to be
 the center of the world

Together we spin 
and twirl for everybody
else just looks on

An everything stops
only you and I are 
left to dance under 
the light

This is Forever

This is Love

© 2010 RJM


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how beautiful those moments are .. ask a heart that has loved and lost and it'll tell of what it has been through .. i wish that no one has to undergo that kind of pain .. Love should stay on forever .. nicely put down

ps- amazing song !

Posted 13 Years Ago


We need those private moments. Where we feel safe and alone with our sweet love. It would be cool to be hidden away on a island with one special person. A beautiful poem of love and hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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RJM
RJM

Manila, Philippines



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