Strange Voices.

Strange Voices.

A Poem by uyisteven

All about the struggle within my head.

Put yourself together
Stop drooling profusely

She's Beautiful
We all can see that
No one is that blind to disagree
But this isn't the right way.

Strange thoughts forming  in my soul.
Get off me.
Eyes should never be taking off her
A momentarily blink
A slight shift in glance
And *Perfection* would be lost.

Am trapped
For once in my life
I have no intention of breaking free.

Let me bask in your presence Miss
Fill my eyes to the brim
Till I can take no more.

You all I want
A touch of your lips,
Fingers running through your hair
Steamy hands parting those thighs
What more can I wish for.

But wait a minute,
What is this?
whispers caressing my Ears
Strange voices urging me up

Wake up you F00l
You dreaming again
Keep Stealing Shakespeare's journals
You never getting her with that

A thousand words spoken
A million writeups spilled
And you not an inch closer 
In making her yours

Give up now
Save yourself from this foolish quest
Or haven't you heard?
The good guys never gets the girl.

© 2016 uyisteven

Author's Note

Air Your Views please.

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Nicely written. left a vivid impression. Well chosen words. You left out anything that didn't push the theme. Here are a few easily corrected mechanical changes you might consider.
eyes should never be taking (taken) off her

You (are) all I want
whispers (Whispers) caressing my Ears (ears)
Wake up you FOOl (FOOL)

Posted 2 Years Ago

great job! :)
Plz check my book

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on October 20, 2016
Last Updated on October 20, 2016
Tags: Romance, love Poems



Lagos, Ikeja, Nigeria

Just a young boy expressing his feelings with Words..And a Die-hard Philanthropist. more..