when you're gone..!

 those moments were so precious that will never go from my heart..the day when we were walking in rain...walking through the empty street..the way you talk...the way you expressed your love...the way you smile...those promises of yours...those silly little things you do...those small pranks....it just made my world...i thought god gave me the whole world...it felt like this destination is smiling at me with those beautiful gift of flowers...!!

my world was full of happiness...we walked really slow when we were together...we meet and sit together for hours without any words..but still when we went back...i always had a smile for the best consversation ever...i thought i had you i had got everything...you hold my hand...we were walking in the world of happiness...my dreams came true..everything was so adorable just like i had a beautiful dream...

yeah! it was a beautiful dream...but only till the moment i realised your hands parting from mine...when i raised my eyes to see you, you were no where near,i searched for you, till the moment i saw you walking away from me....i raised my hands and i cried and i cried a lot...i called you a thousand time...but you went away as if you were unable to hear...yeah! why will you hear, how can you hear my voice b'coz it was only me who loved you, you never loved me like i did..

yeah! it was just a beautiful dream..just a dream...it left me with the broken pieces of my heart...but i.__i still love you with those broken pieces...that whole night i cried and cried....and i cried...daily in the morning i hope that you will be waiting for me outside...but you never thought of me...i tried so hard to move on...but i couldn't as if my life is stopped there...time went on and on....and it tought me its value...it tought me what you were and what you made me..

time went on...and i'm so glad that i have moved ahead...i forgot you...yeah, i forgot you...or may be i'm just pretending....it changed me totally..i was left with no feelings...this world thought that i'm born without feelings..but they don't know...you made me like that...why you acted like a lover when you were not..why you pretended i'm ur world..when i was not...if you had to leave me like this..why you pretended as you will be there through life...?

yeah! you were a big fake...i saw you with someone ...you were so happy as we were once...i felt happy inside atleast  my love is happy with someone else...then i realised i was wrong..the way you left me...she left you....the way you left me...the way i felt once...you felt....that incident left you broken heart...same i exprienced once...earlier i was left lonely...and now you are left alone..that time you laughed at me..but now i don't laugh at you b'coz i know your pain..i can feel it...this time you realise ...that the same you did with me...

you realised ..you apologized...you felt my pain...you came back to me to apologize...i was so glad you realised...

you wanted me to start a new beginning...and to make a rememberable ending...but then i went away as you went away once...b'coz somewhere inside still i hold a fear to be cheated again...to be squashed again...i went away..and those feeling were no more left like earlier was....no more love was left with me to give u....

i went away....yeah! those memories were so special...

i'm unable to forget...they'll never go from my heart..

and i will never love anyone else like i loved you...

i loved you from the core of my heart....

from the depth of my hollow heart....

but i just went away...and i'll never come back....

i'll never...and why would i.... to be cheated again...

i love you so much but i'll never come back...

 

Author's Note

this is just my imagination...not a real case...!!i have a habit of day dreaming..i can dream for hours together.;)lolz..n dis piece is just a part of those dreams of mine..!!!

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Wow! What an amazing piece of writing....This is exactly what I feel right now, you know there in nothing better feeling for a writer when a reader come to you and ask you that what were you thinking about when you this piece because this is exactly what I felt!

Everything here is just perfect, from the flow to the format....from the emotions to the pictures.
But its very hard for me to digest your author's note, yet even I write like this while stepping into someone else's shoes but still it is quite impossible to write something emotionally so powerful like this by just day dreaming.

Though I loved it entirely, but the ending really stands out for me...This is what life is all about, moving on....But the irony is that sometimes its just impossible for us to move on!

Also I liked these lines a lot - "it left me with the broken pieces of my heart...but i.__i still love you with those broken pieces.." - This is what true love is all about, its amazing how you give your heart to someone expecting them to do the same.....and even though they break your heart...you keep holding them with each and every broken piece! That strange feeling is known as love!

Thanks a lot for sharing this piece of writing here, I'm glad that I came across such a talented writer like you mam! :)

[John J. Smiley]

That was different! If a picture is worth a thousand word, this poem is over seven thousand words long. Now let me give you a little lecture on forgiveness...never mind. Good presentation, very nice.

[Kelley]

WOW you have heart breaking day dreams......smiles
I like this story and I really loved how you broke up the story with pic's. That added to the story at just the right time.
Great write!!! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great piece of art pictures and writing together.. very well done and yes well we all have been there unfortunately.. it would be nice to think life was a fairy-tale but it is full of it's ups and downs... many can relate to your dream or vision here.. thank you for sharing!!!

[Life Calling!!!]

Love is something that every one has felt in his/her lifetime...at least once...and its such a powerful emotion that once broken can never be repaired...And its amazing how you could imagine these things and write?! I imagine a lot too...but all my day-dreams are alway happy and positive....my life is so full of negativity that I escape with my dreams, and it's a little funny that someone should dream about negativity...no offence meant Vaishali, please don't take any....I loved the piece...it is truly very very sad but in a very beautiful way....and those amazing pictures that you've posted go so well with the words! Fabulous!

God Bless dear!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Amazingly well done. Loved your pictures too.