i'm SORRY i cannot AMEND it

I fear this pain

I fear what I was

And what I have become

I wonder what life was

And what it has become

I regret for choosing wrong path

I regret my decision about life

I was mistaken in judging things

And I’m sorry I can't amend it

Time slipped like water from my hand

And I was not capable enough to hold it back

I got many wounds b'coz of my heart full decision

But I was so helpless I can't weep...

Happiness came but so fatal to clear the wounds of my emptiness

Life took me to a fork stage I weep while smiling

I’m amazed if I will ever come out of this double sided road

But I please life not to break me again

It’s very hard for me to hold broken pieces of my heart

I’m not capable to hold it any more

I’m SORRY god....your child have lost this fight. “FORGIVE ME"

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is something straight from my heart...else poem itself describes..!

Reviews

[Life Calling!!!]

This is a very touching poem, Vaishali, and it hit my heart in one go! Honestly, I am at such a stage of life right now, that I think this was meant for me....Thank you for sharing this with me...it so so so beautifully sad!

Love the piece in all. A few typos/grammar errors, but overall, really good. Keep up the work, dear, and keep sharing!

God Bless!

[Crazy Cat Man]

Oh i can relate to this poem very much and often feel like this when I am trying to make decisions in my life thats best for me. Nothing is easy. We have to realized that. It really doesn't get better as we get older. All i Can say is to take the time to self-reflect and understand your self and clear the mind to make better decisions. Im glad i read this piece tonight. great job :D

[ScorpioPoet]

you wrote this beautifully....i could really feel the pain....it flowed really nice :)

[Anna]

the font is a little distracting. =/


It's strange how pain can be so beautifully written. Wonderful.
I love the raw emotion here.

[John J. Smiley]

This by far your best poetry yet. Improved diction and flow. But, here's the box of bandaids I was saving for you. Now fix all those broken pieces and write about something, sunny, warm, appealing and friendly. Let see how talented you really are.

[deeps]

This is so bitterly sad and emotional, I like pieces that come from teh heart, that is sheer poetry.
very well written write.

[Winter McPherson]

Has such a sadness to it......so much pain here!

[Anita B Jacques]

Be grateful for feeling, with time the pain fade away.
Hugs

[barricade]

WOW!!! such a heartfelt write...truly is straight from your heart...beautiful...each word standing out...the sadness, the pain, the fear...so clear...perfectly portrayed....words coming straight from the heart leaving a lasting impression on the reader...touches me deeply...

My favorite lines...

"m amazed if I will ever come out of this double sided road
But I please life not to break me again
It's very hard for me to hold broken pieces of my heart
I'm not capable to hold it any more"

these words are just so strong, so powerful...heart wrenching!!! instigating an impromptu prayer from the depths of my heart...
may God bless you with all the strength and the determination to keep you going strong!!!!
you haven't lost...!!!


keep it up Vaishali!!! and keep going!!!

great write...

[kate _wolves]

this is so realistic,deep,emotional ,melancholic, i can sense the pain and agony in each and every word of this poem !!
as you said, i indeed feel that it came right from your heart !!
and i just love this line "Life took me to a fork stage I weep while smiling"!
Life isn't filled with roses alone, watch out for the thorns!
thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem !!

[kosha]

Life's not so easy... it is hard! We make mistakes...thats human nature. but with the touch and support of God we can overcome it all! Believe in Him.. you will definitely shine out ..^_^