YOU...!!

the way i do..
the way i flew..
what ever i do...
leads me to you..

Author's Note

this one just suddenly came into my mind...!!^_^

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

this is short, simple, & strait to the point. i love it. when you love someone, your thoughts, your dreams your life always involve them, always lead back to that person/place. i also really love the line "the way i flew" for some reason, it is very whimsical, and i can see how it relates to life, & i really think for me, it MAKES this poem. an amazing write.

[Emmmaaa! ;D]

This is extremely short, but very straightforward. I liked it a lot. (:

[MyDearRobby]

AWW sO cUtE ,ShOrT ANd SWeeT! :3

[talulu love]

its cute simple and tells it all good job

[Lydia]

I enjoyed this one. Innocent and pure, it's a nice poem :)

[John J. Smiley]

I'm glad it did. Thanks

[red_saphyre]

very simple yet meaningful you are great vaishia i always enjoy reading your work it is always so wonderful

[QuietPoet]

This was beautiful. So much can come from the shortest writes. =)

[Alice Oiseau]

Sometimes I feel this... anyway. I like this one. There's nothing extremely special about it, except that it captures a part of fate that some people don't necessarily see, but should see more often.
Good write.
Cheers.

[Winter McPherson]

Short and to the point!

[Honeypot]

This is good. A very sweet and smooth rhyme. You did good.