My love....

My love....

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

I cried for none.....

But for the one...

Love of my life....

But not in sight...

 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


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Simple, cute & poignant. I even like the trailing of the dot-dot-dots - it's like a long sigh we all take with you. Thanks for sharing

Samith

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

we all cry for the one we love ..
and this is a very nice feeling same time dark and hurtful ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Austin that this is a very complex piece of writing and every individual can have a different outlook towards it...But this is what the beauty of poetry is!
Amazing work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is something everyone can relate too...that one person you loved but never looked at you.
great job :]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, clever, like many others you have written. Makes the the reader decide what the words should mean. Very nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hm. I saw this in a way, probably unintended. But I'll make it more realistic: Lovers torn apart, and one cries for the other (presuming the other has died), ergo not in sight. Heart-wrenching.
Good write.
Cheers.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There a number of ways you can read this poem. Some sound differently than others, giving it sort of a different meaning. Wonderfully clever

-Austin

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the photo... so dejected and alone. I wonder who you are waiting for and how long you will wait. My experience is it more productive just to go get them! Love and Hugs, charly

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

altho your writing may be your claim to fame,what is up with the change of name?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your good at this Vaishali...this short poem says so much that one can't but wonder how you became so clever. I love the way this is written...nice write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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