A walk in rain...

A walk in rain...

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

Walking in the rain
A pleasure of pain...
Heart held in vain
Crying in the rain…


© 2009 Vaishali..^_^



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Vaishali..^_^
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I love walking in rain..smell is also good.
but everything is a waste when you have something weird
going on..crying in rain hides your feelings but your inside
is in real pain..So emotional..keep writing!!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this one. I have felt this way many times and it really makes the reader think about it and how it relates to them.

Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work...deeply heart felt and moving...the pleasure of the pain, the heart held in vain!
painful...yet beautiful...

keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was good i sensed hidden meaning in it i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so painful and tragic :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was very interesting,
simple yet very thought provoking.
Pleasurable Pain? thats gonna be on my mind for a while..
you could feel the intensity of your emotions but its so "cool" that you formatted ur thoughts in such simplicity.
well dont ;)


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know, I'm not one for short poems, but I really like this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short...to the point.....you could really feel the emotion in this...great job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very meaningful. A lot of hidden meaning I assume was put into this poem. Great work :)

-Austin

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

walks in the rain only hides the tears you wish for nobody to see,
while your writing shows us those tears,good work...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 23, 2009