Never will i show...

Never will i show...

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 

This fear will ever remain....

Never will it go....


This broken heart will ever be the same...

Never will I show....

 

Life is creating a mess that’s a secret....

Never will this be disclosed...

 

This heart will always hold that pain....

No one will ever know...

 

My destiny may be the worst....

But never will I sob...

 

Life is worth living ...

And never will i forget the fake smile...

 

Because ....

My pain is special gift given by the one's i loved...

Never will it go...

And never will i show....!!


© 2009 Vaishali..^_^



Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
this one just came into my mind...at midnight when i was unable to sleep....
and this is by far the truth of my life...
but the fact is whatever life brings to us we have to except and that's what i exactly did in my journey....
if we are smiling in the worst times that doesn't mean we don't feel the pain...but that means we have learnt how to keep on moving with it...our smile cannot make us happy but it can cheer many other faces....
so maybe that is the reason for we have to always keep smiling...for our loved ones...:)

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I have felt this way many times,so I write to let myself free from the shell I've created.

our own little hell,
a tiny little shell,
in which we reside,
sit and hide,
sit and dwell,
in our own little hell,
we think of the past,
or how long it will last,
or just sit for a spell,
in our own little shell,
our personal hell,
in which we dwell...

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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Hide the pain for the ones we love, or else we'll hurt them.
I think it's a truth of many lives. We don't want to hurt the people we care about most. So we hold it in to protect them, even it means hurting ourselves.
Some strong statements made. Good poem.
Cheers.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"My pain is special gift given by the one's i loved..." um... something to think about. Great insight!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write, emotional and true! Great job!
Janice Ann

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this write is great i felt it as if it were my pain, my secret, my heart... i loved it.

keep up the good work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Vishu! It was beautifully sad (I'm talking about both your poem as well as the author's note)
Love hurts, it hurts very bad!
That pain never ever goes :'(
:'( :'(
(subak subak...)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah..Beautiful.
I somehow much inclined towards your authors note :) but indeed it's a beautiful write. The pain inside..that you'll never show..is shown very beautifully here ;) Your words painted a marvelous piece that is truly admirable. Very well said. Bless you. Take care.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing...but really sad at the same time

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have felt this way many times,so I write to let myself free from the shell I've created.

our own little hell,
a tiny little shell,
in which we reside,
sit and hide,
sit and dwell,
in our own little hell,
we think of the past,
or how long it will last,
or just sit for a spell,
in our own little shell,
our personal hell,
in which we dwell...

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh this was magnificent and so relatable, thanks for the read request!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH Angel this is beautiful. so sad and heartbreaking but very well expressed. You amaze me at your age that you are able to move people so much with so few words....excellent!


Mia

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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