I Still care.....

 

 

Someone try to stomp on my reality

But still I care...

 

Somebody doesn't care about my worth

But I do care...

 

Someone crushes me to the very core

But I can't spare...

 

Somebody try to douse the love in my heart

But still I dare...

 

Someone’s vitriolic words dig my heart

But still I bear...

 

I love that bittersweet someone

Who doesn't care...

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

:) :)

Reviews

[barricade]

"I love that bittersweet someone
Who doesn't care..."

Wow! perfect lines...how flawlessly you put your feelings to words...always leaves me in awe...
Great work Vaishali...beautifully penned...i loved it...and i agree with Bhavya on this...your growth as a writer is phenomenal...keep it up!!! and keep those words flowing...

Barricade...

[Alias Fletcher]

Dig deep within and you will find a treasure. Lovely write,charly

[LonelySoul]

hmmmm,very interesting read,nice work

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Someone's vitriolic words dig my heart

But still I bear...


Ah! This was simply beautiful..
How much have you grown as a writer in this past one year....
Really, I can see the growth :)
It was absolutely brilliant!

[Alice Oiseau]

Watch out for those grammar mistakes:
"Somebody *doesn't* care about my worth"
"I love that bittersweet someone who *doesn't* care"

Great message at the end.
Cheers.