I Still care.....

I Still care.....

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 

 

Someone try to stomp on my reality

But still I care...

 

Somebody doesn't care about my worth

But I do care...

 

Someone crushes me to the very core

But I can't spare...

 

Somebody try to douse the love in my heart

But still I dare...

 

Someone’s vitriolic words dig my heart

But still I bear...

 

I love that bittersweet someone

Who doesn't care...

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^



Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
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"I love that bittersweet someone
Who doesn't care..."

Wow! perfect lines...how flawlessly you put your feelings to words...always leaves me in awe...
Great work Vaishali...beautifully penned...i loved it...and i agree with Bhavya on this...your growth as a writer is phenomenal...keep it up!!! and keep those words flowing...

Barricade...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dig deep within and you will find a treasure. Lovely write,charly

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmmm,very interesting read,nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I love that bittersweet someone
Who doesn't care..."

Wow! perfect lines...how flawlessly you put your feelings to words...always leaves me in awe...
Great work Vaishali...beautifully penned...i loved it...and i agree with Bhavya on this...your growth as a writer is phenomenal...keep it up!!! and keep those words flowing...

Barricade...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Someone's vitriolic words dig my heart

But still I bear...


Ah! This was simply beautiful..
How much have you grown as a writer in this past one year....
Really, I can see the growth :)
It was absolutely brilliant!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Watch out for those grammar mistakes:
"Somebody *doesn't* care about my worth"
"I love that bittersweet someone who *doesn't* care"

Great message at the end.
Cheers.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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