Footprints in sand....

Footprints in sand....

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

Footprints in sand...

As he walk away leaving my hand...
Tears fall down my eyes..
As i wait for him to turn back...

I can't utter the pain i feel..
I can't heal the wound he gave...
As i stand here alone
I realize the wrong I did...

I loved a lame ...
Who is the one i wanna blame...
As i question my heart 
Why true love end up fake...?
Why true love end up fake...?
 

© 2010 Vaishali..^_^



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Awe Vaishali, I know that pain can overtake ones heart when another leaves us cold and wet. To wonder why they do such things...well, its some times is a waste of time, valuable time...

To fall and break, oh my...geez did I have my share. Caring about someone takes alot, to give your undying gratitude to them, and watch it fizzle...hurts. But to fall and break, naw your' a wonderful young lady, you have much to give to the world of artistry...whip your magic into the air so they can hear your words on all the canvases that you paint around the world...nice write...hugs

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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True love is never fake..the person we choose might be fake..
footprints in sand shows your prints of foot but it diminishes quickly..
it is always hard when you love someone and then you see that he/she
never love you back as you did:(
Nice poem ..keep writing (^_^)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sadly we all leave footprints and some miss the beauty inside,we love and we lose.....very emotional writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi, 'footprints in the sand' is a beautiful line which carries great meaning. Lovely poem. Keep up the good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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A band of soldiers finds diplomacy in the dreg forest comes with consequences.
Love can twist us up. I tell people. Never show defeat in public. Make them think you didn't give a damn. I like the flow of this poem. I like the powerful statement at the end. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a amazing poem
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe Vaishali, I know that pain can overtake ones heart when another leaves us cold and wet. To wonder why they do such things...well, its some times is a waste of time, valuable time...

To fall and break, oh my...geez did I have my share. Caring about someone takes alot, to give your undying gratitude to them, and watch it fizzle...hurts. But to fall and break, naw your' a wonderful young lady, you have much to give to the world of artistry...whip your magic into the air so they can hear your words on all the canvases that you paint around the world...nice write...hugs

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vaishali, i think this was my fav of all ur work i have read so far. everytime i read your work i feel as if i can connect with you... as if you are writing from my point of view. i always love reading your work keep writing because your really good.

Tiff

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good one!! i just love this poem... i can't choose one or two line that liked 'cause each and every line of your poem connects with me very well......... nice one...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There were a lot of really strong sentiments in this - anguish, disbelief. You do a nice job of putting feelings into words. Heel or heal? Nice job with the poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really!! it makes me so touch and deep i can understand the mean of love ......you were so painful in this writting with your feelings that was amazing, topic was also very passionable 'Footprints In The Sand' i really feel your love....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 5, 2009
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