In the darkness of night

In the darkness of night

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

In the darkness of night

I tried to light up my side

You came in front of me

With the memories so bright

 

I thought i wont let you go

But you went and left me so

I cried to my destiny so loud

Though i knew you vanished in the crowd

 

You thought I'll cry whole night

But you were wrong i fought for my pride

I'm not insane better take away this pain

You can't break me as you thought when you hate me

 

I'm not the one you can play with

So better get lost and stay with

Someday when you might be at my place

I'll tell you what exactly LOVE is...

...


© 2010 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
Just a random piece..I wrote it at midnight...when i was unable to sleep

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the midnight poems are always the most powerful ones, cus you have this strong emotion in your heart, that you wanna talk to someone about, but there's no one there, so you write it down. i love this because it's so raw and beautiful and real. i can relate to some parts, i just love the power that comes with it. thanks for sharing ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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the midnight poems are always the most powerful ones, cus you have this strong emotion in your heart, that you wanna talk to someone about, but there's no one there, so you write it down. i love this because it's so raw and beautiful and real. i can relate to some parts, i just love the power that comes with it. thanks for sharing ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was very raw and intense..sad till the core but very creative indeed.
You have touched me with this piece.
Very well written :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sometimes it is good to vent if only to get it off your mind.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Vaishali..^_^
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rajasthan, India



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