Incomplete

Incomplete

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

© 2010 Vaishali..^_^



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Vaishali..^_^
that's just a random piece...again i wrote it in midnight...:D

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thoughts on a note pad will sometimes become the greatest of ideas
but if you don't connect those dots,
it will stay just thoughts scribbled on paper.
when we step back to look at the big picture,
take in everything around us,then we become whole,
and as we find ourselves in our center,we become complete.

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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random but good...
"At the time of great fight..
I feel like an innocent child.." that's something i do
Belief is very important thing when something is tearing you
apart..its nice to see something different in this write of yours..
Keep Writing..Try to write something inspiring:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Random but amazing
so great
loved that :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing. im in love with your writing ._.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job. lovely write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ive written some of my best work at night or in the early morning . Very thoughtful piece, I liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautifully Written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poem is very good. Sometime when my mind can stop. Best poetry is create by me. I like this poem. Being incomplete and trying to understand the world in strong in the words. The ending was outstanding. A very good question.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved this! The ryhmes and everything, the words were very describing, Hope to hear more from you, Sometimes the poems wrote at midnight show the true soul, wonderful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It was raw, but still very intense and immensely beautiful.
I loved it :) Great write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very deep and sad. It was short, but right to the point. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 8, 2010
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