One Line

One Line

A Poem by Valendette

Pain's translucient soldiers battle to evade the boundaries of my eyes.

© 2012 Valendette


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So much power within one line, I love the way it sounds when I read it out loud and in one line it manages to grasp an entire range of emotion and feeling, not unlike haiku.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A good defining...

Posted 12 Years Ago


This says so much and yet it's only one line. Really nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Valendette
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