A Thing About Machines

A Thing About Machines

A Poem by Val Val

This was posted in my blog. I like it.

January 1, 2010 / 12:55 am

Tonight I stood on
My balcony, in the
Moonlight I waited.
Tonight I caught in
My palm the hope
That only winds can
Ride and when I
Had it snug in my
Pocket, I sent my
Own brand of dream
Along the way, a
Whisper kiss of a
Thought, that if
I could I would and
If we were we would
Rule the world some day.

© 2011 Val Val

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A great wish, a reality you dropped when you were standing on your balcony at night looking at the moon and wising something. I enjoyed the piece. Starting as well as ending was great and nicely penned words're making the write powerful. Nice flow of ink.

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that is a moment that is

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i would dare call it a cute arrangement of words.

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Don't email me and demand I read and review your work. It's bizarre. Wake me if you like me, Wake me if you want me, Wake me if you need another poem. L'original style, au-del du blah bla.. more..

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