OF SIN & FORGIVENESS

OF SIN & FORGIVENESS

A Poem by VALORMORE DE PLUME
"

SIMPLE TRUTH

"

From the

Word Garden

of

Valormore


OF SIN

&

FORGIVENESS

 

To sin is to break the laws of God.

Laws were written to show us how to be

selflessly in love with His entire creation.

The law is not about condemnation.

It is instruction, enlightenment to truth.


God created us with free will.

We focus only on selfish concerns.

Our understanding of the creation,

 is limited to the here and now,

 within our circumstance.



Our perception is limited.

We experience aloneness.

We feel separated from God.

We feel hopeless.

That hurts.


The compassion of God seems undeserved,

and out of reach so we hide in our shame.

In many ways we lie to ourselves,

thinking HE doesn't care.


God feels and shares that pain.

He wants us to choose Him,

and the love He is extending to us.

However, we stay in shame.


He gave himself our punishment,

so that we can come to Him,

 as a friend,without shame.


He wants to share 

all that He is,

with each of us.


We must ask,

using our free will.

Then accept the gift,

 that we do not deserve.


HIS UNCHANGING LOVE.


In CHRIST

Your friend

Valormore


© 2015 VALORMORE DE PLUME



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So it has been written. So let it be done. Much truth in these words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

2 Years Ago

Lovely to see you again my friend.
Interesting on many levels. Just have to go with blind faith, and embrace the love. Nice write my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


VALORMORE DE PLUME

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jon, I believe the simple truth from God, is given to us in a way that even children can u.. read more
val a truly inspirational poem I loved it i felt myself a better man for reading it

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

our religious opinions may vary, but the lies spread by the blossom of love will seed unity in diversions .. beautiful poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


VALORMORE DE PLUME

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Khaled.
The words are very uplifting. I can see from them that you are a religious person. Thank you for reminding us that God's love is unending and unchanging. With that belief, my hope that everything will be alright never stops.

Posted 4 Years Ago


VALORMORE DE PLUME

4 Years Ago

Thank YOU my poetic friend. Reviewing your poem inspired this praise report.
Beautiful message through beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


VALORMORE DE PLUME

4 Years Ago

Thank you Keely, you are welcome in my word garden any time.
God's grace is a freedom we do not deserve. Well done, Valormore. You speak the truth in this. I also like the various formats you use in your writing; it's very unique. :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear one for knowing the truth when you hear it. This means that God lives in you too. Als.. read more
Beautifuly stated and the message abundantly clear. Nice one Valormore

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. Many see God as the abusive father hovering over them to punish every mistake.

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