Originality

Originality

A Poem by VALORMORE DE PLUME
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A Poem About Poetry

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Originality

A Poem About Poetry

By

Valormore De Plume

 

Inspiration resembles,

relaxing next to a stream.

Various leaves floating away.

We want to make an artwork,

embracing the loveliest leaves.

We elect to choose the prettiest,

 before the waters sequester them.

Whatever arrangement shall we,

position them upon the pages.

Array their magnificence to,

surpass fading daydreams.

Enchant across the ages.

We display the leaves,

with spaces between.

Others fill in the spaces

With what they really need.

 


© 2014 VALORMORE DE PLUME



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i really like the idea of readers filling spaces with what they really NEED...the key word is "need"--

and to me that is the most important aspect of poetry...how a reader can relate in some way that is important to him or her.

not so much what the writer needs for others to get...but what the reader needs to see in order for the poem to make a difference to him or her.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Precisely Jacob,- need - is on both sides of the equation.The poet needs to express,feelings.The rea.. read more



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Filling in the spaces with what they need, is exactly what poetry, and any art for that matter, allow the viewer to do. We all need to come to our own conclusion to truly be attached to art. Wonderful ideas.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sir. Your comment places a great smile on the front of my head.
Cory Barrett

3 Years Ago

and yours on mine
Quite Elegant and beautiful.


Thank you for sharing this Enchanting piece.


I loved these stanza's lines.


Others fill in the spaces

With what they really need.




Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kindred Poet, for the encouraging words.
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet
i really like the idea of readers filling spaces with what they really NEED...the key word is "need"--

and to me that is the most important aspect of poetry...how a reader can relate in some way that is important to him or her.

not so much what the writer needs for others to get...but what the reader needs to see in order for the poem to make a difference to him or her.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Precisely Jacob,- need - is on both sides of the equation.The poet needs to express,feelings.The rea.. read more
Poets write the words...but others interpret them...

Sometimes finding meaning that was not meant...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

I love that about people, everyone can have a different point of view. Some great writing can offer .. read more
A serene read, like an invitation 'tween the spaces, to fill your lovely basket to the brim with yet more poetic harmonious words. Skillfully ink'd. Valormore.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda. Your comments are charming and intoxicating.
VDP it's such an honor reading your material as you always them with wisdom, just the imagination of floating leave sitting near by the stream. Marvelous elegantly crafted

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words A. Amos, I am equally honored by your visit.
Linger in the .. read more
A. Amos

3 Years Ago

Thanks my friend, I will not only visit alone but also guide other's. You're most welcome

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