United In Love

United In Love

A Story by VALORMORE DE PLUME
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Give all that you have.

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United In Love

An essay from the

Mindscapes

Of

Valormore

 

     He thinks back to happier times when her smile shone like the midday sun, warming his heart. They were young, with dreams of endless tomorrows. They could stare into each other’s eyes for hours, expressing wordless contentedness of their souls.

On this day, he cradles her fragile form in his arms as the life drains from her body. She is fading fast and his heart is sinking into a pool of despair. Her eyes are saying, ‘It is not in vain, for our love story, although shortened, becomes the inspiration for a whole generation.’ Her strength, even in this final moment, passes into him. Her final words, ‘I’ll be with you always.’ Serve him well in times when others feel hopeless against this foe.

     Many seasons pass as the war rages on. The women fight beside their men and in the end they prevail against the evil horde by the power of being united in love.

THE END

By

Valormore


© 2015 VALORMORE DE PLUME



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This is definitely a tearjerker, for I cannot read it without a tear in my eye and a swelling in my throat. So well done Valormore.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much dear Elisakay for reviewing.
Very lovely story, it was wonderful to see the strength of their love in this sad moment. It was made all the more sadder by the first paragraph which really showed their love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

1 Year Ago

Thank you Archia. I appreciate you gracious comments.
I shall come back and read it again and again.........whenever I have one of "those" days, for I haved lived these emotions. Thank you for always keeping it so real....Barbz

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

2 Years Ago

Thank you Barbz. Things you want to revisit often,click on library icon. They are easier to find tha.. read more
I'm glad you like this. Thank you for reading and commenting. Your words are encouraging.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A beautiful story,that brought me to tears.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

1 Year Ago

Thank you Elisakay,for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked this.

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Welcome to, "The Mindscapes of Valormore" I hope my stories produce pictures in your mind. That is what a mindscape is. A place you can go repe.. more..

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