It's over

It's over

A Poem by Vampire Shadow
"

Nobody should ever suffer.

"
You think to yourself,
"Don't let them see what your hiding."
"They wouldn't understand."
"They will think your crazy."
"Maybe they would be right."
Years of holding everything in
Horrible memories you would give anything to forget
People have destroyed you and stomped you into the dirt
You think you are not strong
You think your about to break
But the only thing that breaks is the clouds and u see a sliver of sunshine
Something you haven't seen in god knows how long
"Am I safe?"
"Is it finally over?"
"The torment and destruction?"
Its quiet.
All you hear is the soft wind
You feel the warmth of the sun on your face
Your throat is burning trying not to cry but you do anyways
You fall to yours knees sobbing but its not because you are sad 
"I cant believe it."
"I won."

© 2015 Vampire Shadow



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Author's Note

Vampire Shadow
Leave if you are going to be a grammar nazi

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I love the poem. I love the way you wrote it and the imagery.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Point taken. I won't be a grammar Nazi. I loved it. Great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vampire Shadow

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
well, I'm not one to be a grammar nazi god knows, so nothing to worry about there, hehe,, I like this, a lot. I respect the anger and sorrow barely behind the lines, I like the openness of it, the pace, the honesty and construction. VERY well written, and I definitely want to read more!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vampire Shadow

2 Years Ago

haha I'm very glad you enjoyed this and hopefully i will write more, not sure.
daninstockholm

2 Years Ago

I truly hope you do!!
The Archangel Gabriel

2 Years Ago

I hope you write more as well. Good luck and hope to hear more from you.

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Im 20. You may not know my name. I haven't written in a while so I apologize. I'm very open to reading new things. Love stories. Just another human in this world. I hope you enjoy my past poems .. more..

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