You Monster

You Monster

A Poem by Vampire Shadow

Leave.
Leave and stop coming back
Memories count to ya know
Its to painful
Why do you like torturing me?
It hurts 
Why don't you feel the same pain I do?
 agonizing
 unbearable
Please make it stop
Please
My chest hurts from crying
I can barely breathe
This happens every night
I have to fake my smiles ya know
Its horrible
This is not how someone should live
You did this to me
You made me into this...thing
And I will never forgive you

© 2015 Vampire Shadow



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This is so real and alive with feeling. The thing I most admire in poetry is the essence of the person being tangible in the lines. I can feel that in these lines. Well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Man, this put me on the throne of guilt like I was the monster. I love this in a hateful and disturbed way. Great job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I've known some monsters in my time. They come in all shapes and sizes. And they can become demons who haunt us... Sometimes forever. Thanks for sharing your powerful work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very powerful. You really made me feel something. Good poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Vampire Shadow
Vampire Shadow

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Im 20. You may not know my name. I haven't written in a while so I apologize. I'm very open to reading new things. Love stories. Just another human in this world. I hope you enjoy my past poems .. more..

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