4x6

4x6

A Poem by Vanessa Pavelock

sitting in the background

of a 4x6 photograph

was a man silently

screaming for help as

he sipped on burning

hot tea and regrets.

© 2013 Vanessa Pavelock


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Wow! I think you've great skill to pass across so much in these few words.
It's very lovely...and sad.
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


really like this short decisive but evocative at the same time
leaves much for thought
enjoyable
like your title choice- it drew me in had to know
thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


I admire your ability to say so much is so short a piece. You create a very real and tangible world with the last line conveying such a moving image. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 8, 2013
Last Updated on May 8, 2013
Tags: poetry, regret, passerby, coffee shop, tea, photography, photos