Sweet Rush

A short and simple love poem.

My love,

my knees grow weak at the sight of you,

your scent unique in its own,

your voice sweeter than a morning bird's song,

only you can provide me with this sweet rush,

the little things that make you you,

make me smile,

I am sure no one else takes their notice,

as much as I do.

Reviews

[MAC]

what a simple and beautiful love poem :)

[Chris]

Nice and sweet aftertones... when read aloud.

[Neon]

Wow .. Your cool, kitty .. I loved this sorry to say but am gonna save yer this piece right now .. lol
I enjoyed this ..
"your voice sweeter than a morning bird's song" this line's so cool and powerful, it's totally touched mah heart .. your ripped mah heart, baby .. by yer cool words. Keep on :)