Scent of Rain

Celebrating the falling water.

The sweet scent of the rain, 

the soft pitter-patter of drops 

orchestrating a beautiful symphony piece,

the air warm and the ground damp,

fragrant cool mist brushes across my cheeks,

the flowers turn their faces towards the clouds

soaking in the mellow tears of life,

refreshing and cool their colors burst,

the wind fanning through the trees,

creating a refreshing breeze,

the sky painted a soft grey,

it seems to be one of those sleepy days,

the rain pouring,

dozing off into deep snoring,

the pattern of natures song lulls me to dreaming.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

You missed my favored part!! The smell of grass!! :) good poem poetess Hehe

[Kitten]

haha thank you Mr. Bernard :D you made me smile ^.^
~Kitten

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe pleasure!! :) put in grass later :D lol

[Kitten]

of course :)
fellow grass scent lovers unite! *fist in the air* haha :D

[Carl Drake Barnard]

0 Seconds Ago Hehehe I love your passion,it intrigues me Hehe I
shall look forward to reading more Hehe keep it! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the sound of rain also. Create a peaceful place for us to relax and know peace/sleep. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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You have a gift for poetry. I love the way you describe each line seemingly without effort.

[fireblossom]

At times, I feel as you. My brain slows. All is taste, touch, smell and sound. It lulls me to a soft place.

A lovely poem.

[Trace]

reminds me of the old Eddie Rabbit song: I love a rainy night.
and I do, or to be awakened by the flash of lightning through the window followed by the crash of thunder from a close hit.
I also loved this poem. Very nice.

Trace

[Kevin]

Oh my goodness...I actually got sleepy reading this. Not in a bad way XD but because of the description
But this is a pretty darn good short poem :D