My heart song

a pretty fairy falls in love with a human ..

These woods you enter carry secrets deep

Only enter if you think you can keep

The wonder and beauty safe in your hands

So few delicate forests grace our lands

I might be small and unseen but my heart sparkles with pure love

I spring from flowers, tree to tree

Spreading dust along the breeze

Twinkling, sparkling, dazzling wings

I dance in circles and love to sing

My special job involves

Loving every pretty flower

Every single day

On every magic hour

The daisies love to hear

Today you're looking well

But If they're looking droopy

I cast a fairy spell

I curtsies and bows

And says a fair goodbye

The daisies call my name

So off away I fly

Everything came crushing by when I saw you wandering here!

I sat on the mushroom top trying to understand what kind of creature you are!

With silky dark hair and pair of hands larger than mine!

I never saw any creature as you! Not in the sweetened rainbow drops or in the higher trees!

They said curiosity killed the cat I shook my arms and flew!

The big creature keeps on wandering then lay down beside the blurry lake!

As the creature eyes were closed I land gently on its head!

The darkest hair I have ever saw, the softest skin my tiny hands ever touch

What kind of beautiful creature are you?

Where do you live? Oh I wander!

As the pretty dawn came rushing by the creature opened his eyes!

I flew higher than the wind and hide on the tree!

Every night I would sit and wait for the beautiful creature to come

What happened to my tiny pure heart? Why can't I stop this sweet pain?

Why do I long for you? When your hands are bigger than mine?

Why does my heart twitter and tremble every night when u arrives?

What kind of beautiful creature are you?

Do you live above the sky I wander? Or perhaps far on the moon?

What kind of magic do you use? What kind of spell did it capture my heart?

Oh I wander and no longer have my tiny feet wanted to dance!

I will hide on the prettiest flower every night and smile when you shine!

I will sing a beautiful lullaby every night hoping it reach your heart!

I will tell my tale to every beautiful creature they might know your name!

I will fly to the moon and ask perhaps the moon leads me to your land

What kind of creature are you?

My innocent heart can't bear it any longer!

What kind of creature are you?

I'll keep wandering till my voice reaches the heaven!

As tonight is coming to an end I will sing a gentle song to the birds

I will close my eyes and dream of you!

Heaven please let the beautiful creature come again! For my poor heart can't make it without him anymore!

What kind of creature are you?

I will keep on singing and dreaming till my love reach for you!

Author's Note

always appreciated for your review and follow :)

Reviews

[Vian]

That was absolutely beautiful, outstanding! I felt so much longing and pain when he was not there and every emotion you described pierced my heart. I could go on and on regarding the beauty of this piece but I will instead go on another vein. What stopped you from editing this even once before it was posted? 'I' is always capitalized it is not a complicated rule or difficult to accomplish as you type. 'U' is not a word 'you' is the word you were looking for. 'Kinda' and various other texting slang words that you used seriously detracted from the poem. I thought the idea was beautifully portrayed and do hope you will increase the amount of care you put into your work before I feel like reading something so exquisitely described again.

[Vanilla - Sama]

Thanks lot for ur honest review ^^ ill pay more attention next time :) thank you

[Vanilla - Sama]

its have been rewritten and fixed all my slips :)

[Bijay Magar]

Fantastic!Amazing ! Love your writing!

[Vanilla - Sama]

thanks very much :)

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very nice. it s very beautiful text. words very suits together. and i feel like at fairy tale . thanks for sharing. and for sure keep writing

[Vanilla - Sama]

thanks for your review ^^ im super glad that u find it good :)