Tiny

Tiny waves of ups and downs

surrounding

growing moments

of desperation.

Vague hope

convincing to

continue.

Reviews

[theunionisloud]

What part of life ISN'T included in these... sixteen words?
S**t happens... we trudge on.
Dag, yo. Nice write.

[HappyTaylor]

I love how deep and short your poems are. I love to just read them and think for a couple minutes or more.

[luciddreamer]

This one makes me think....love it

[Aven]

it's strength lies in it's simplicity.

[Fabian Franco]

Very short but it hits very hard.
A good flow with some good vocabulary.
This is really really good I like it alot.
Good job. :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Few words with a big meaning. Great job! And once again, it's about oceans...so you know I like it!

[Sav]

The way you capture such a horrid emotion is absolutely perfect; I think it's beautiful.

[McGee]

I think the power of this poem is what is unsaid

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I like this, it's quite simple but complex in its own way (like different connotations of it).

Good write =)