Hypnagogic

Hypnagogic

A Poem by vincentbals

Am I right? 
Have I lost
the armour, 
of the shiny 
knight?

© 2011 vincentbals


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I know how you feel. Never give up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometime I ask the same question. I lost my rabbit foot and four leaf clover. Sometime hard to feel lucky and strong. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Once again, you have expressed deep thought and emotion in such a short poem, at the same time staying true to your writing style.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i liked it a lot. some of the best pieces have only a few words. you did a good job. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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vincentbals
vincentbals

Antwerp, Belgium



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