Not Even

this is one of my favorites to read as it was alot of fun writing.

I'll just be quiet and forget
 I ever read such nonsense
 maybe all this trouble is just
 providence.  the granduer is rich
 with escape.  there's no secrets in
 heaven.  and no rhymes to excuse my mis..
 maybe I just love hate being me
 miss out on everything
 scooby doo and the mystery gang
 can't help me take off whats on my..
 path is like the moment endures
 certainly its a bold statement
 as my legs run across the roads
 and care less about the payment
 I can't keep this rhyme any longer
 and my rythm is a motherfu..
 the days of having fun
 till the day of judgement comes
 one thing that I forgot
 was all who I never thought
 would be like me
 hypocricy,  Id like to write
 but my tears can't keep from
 smearing the lines.
 hard, how hard, till death
 do us part.  but I love life
 like a man holding a rose in strife
 the next line you'd think it was something
 to do with a wife.  now I'm going to go
 learn how to fly a kite.  thats it.
 not good enough, go watch good times, dyna..

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

I can see it was fun to write... it's fun to read! I love the pace of the Rythm this piece takes.
thanks for sharing
bill