dark angel

my first attempt at poerty... be gentle

the living walkng amongst the dead.

fighting for the rights of the innocent and those who have bled.

never to love or feel again.

the warmth of another, life a constant bend.

Never forgetting those who havew fallen.

only hope is to hear god calling.

but the call never comes,

the job is never done.

feeling like death on swift wings,

the dealer of pain, unknowing

where my final resting place maybe

underneath the living world of society

the world of happiness trust and propriety?

or above the world with angels and forgiveness

although i am damned to walk the earth in a state of darkness.

i am ashamed of what i have done,

but it is my duty never to lay down the sword.

Author's Note

its terrible i know but its my first attempt be nice plz

Reviews

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It's not terrible, it's actualy pretty good. I definetly see talent here, just practice a little more and you will be great. Also, remember you must always have confidence in yourslef.

Good job


- Neo