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still editing the poems i wrote from when i was going through my own battles...

Our bodies, sacred

rightfully hand~picked

Departing from the womb of mothers.

A maiden's lost innocence, beautiful,

as the dew that falls according to the peak of dawn.

Substance overtake our bodies

that were also once innocent

Progress fuels our nature

Minds eloquent

and fascinating

We are who we are

wits or not.

Forever shall the human mind stand

remaining unmangled

just like the timbers.

War shall not define us

for the strong not only quiver in their knees...

 

Follow the drury lane

for misconception and confusion lies ahead

Reminince not on the past life

miss not the gift that lies ahead

Why look upon what is behind you

to be blinded by the_________

ahead it lies

Move on ye corrupt mind

for hate

guilt

shame

peversion

shall no longer haunt your soul

Hope being the key

to make it through this battle field

as good times shall follow

Evermore you shall journey on

through grief

pain mishap

elusive thouths

that unwantingly strike us

A mind bound by misconception...

Tangle not in the dilema that strikes us

for the journey is far from done

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

sad . . . and true sometimes, hooked without reconsideration.

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Nate, you have a lotta thought. Did not know you lit a timer on a blast in all directions.

[Alicia Schroeder]

temptation(for the blank) or to be blind by the temptation to look back on what was once lacked..haha, Idk, great so far though..

[Dark Empress]

Blank: Vast Darkness

This is a really beautiful poem. You are very talented.

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Blank: "shadows of the forsaken"

This was refreshing on my soul. For a reason I haven't figured out yet. It had a feeling of suppression and freedom all at the same time. Feelings that I can relate to, I guess.

You are a very talented Poet!

Ash

[Brandee D. Hack]

Blank: "lies you fell through"

And overall it is a very twisty and lovely poem. It has a melodic dance that seems to rush around me as I read. I really enjoyed your expression in this piece. ^.^ It was beautiful!