Hey Baby You Blew Me Away

She shook like a love letter stuck in the wind,
weightless 
as the words left her  
frantically flying
to the lover for whom 
her quivering quill intended. 

This element unseen though felt,
literally 
graced him. 
Whispering her love 
as it blew on her breeze 
of flickering, outstretched pages.

And letters danced and frolicked 
upon his cheek,
a paragraph whistled and whipped his hair 
swiftly followed by 
a declaration of desire 
which came upon a gust 
pushing tears from his eyes
that licked his lobes like lovers lips. 

Swept along by  invisible drafts
that washed over him in sexual syllables 
and caressing consonants 
he is finally enveloped within 
a cyclone of literary parchment,
sealed within the orgasm 
that shook her like a  
love letter 
stuck in the  wind.

Reviews

[Steven]

You blew ME away... Fantastic depiction! I can feel it, alive, moving in the poem. It's trapped there, sliding between letters. No really, I love this. That invisible thing like a current between lovers, how can it not be real when it is so powerful?! But where does it exist? It cannot only be in two separate minds. Great write!

[victoria]

Thank you Steven a most pleasing review. The poem came about when this other poet asked me to write a poem around a first line that he donated and this was what I wrote. It was a bit scary because he is such a good poet.

[Steven]

Well you {smack} the ball out of the park :).

[tenderheart]

very well written it flows nicely

[victoria]

thank you

[tenderheart]

welcome:)

[John McFadyen]

OK Victoria, I surrender. This is magic. This is such an expressive, emotion loaded and sensual poem. It is so well constructed I am guessing you are a student of literature?

[victoria]

thank you

[Antonio Valentino]

relationships can be like the wind, in so many ways can't they..

lovely write

thanks for posting
:)

[victoria]

thank you kindly for the read and review, I guess they can be.

[Antonio Valentino]

you're very welcome :)

[Frank James Davis]

So well done.
Just an excellent offering, victoria!

[victoria]

kind words, thank you Frank

[MOON]

Lovely write ,straight from the heart.

[victoria]

how kind, thank you

[Emma Joy]

Clever, clever .. and more 'tour de force' than love-letter which I sincerely hope is much appreciated .. if not, why not! That final stanza is more ahem .. ahem .. a peeping Tom's delight.

Thank you for sharing .. and, your smile says it all!

[victoria]

thank you so much emma joy

[Pax]

i love the used of imagery, and metaphors. creative, sweet, passionate and lovely. nice enjoyed it.

[victoria]

pleased you did, thank you kindly WillyamPax

[Bpoet]

Very creative and romantically sound. Good work.

[victoria]

thank you kindly Bpoet

[JustLorry]

Beatifully crafted, as ever. Such elegance in your style.

[victoria]

how kind, thank you very much